Echoes *NPAC Nominee Nov. '03*
Not sure about this one - but here goes!EchoesThe coast is cracked and splitand fissured by aeons of crashing wavesand rain-bearing winds.Not a gentle landscape,though the rocky madnessis tamed here...
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don't know where or why you're unsure on this one, davie! I found it mesmerizing and beautiful ... laced with powerful and vivid imagery and words to make our thoughts turn and ponder ... the ocean...
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How indeed can you paint things that move and change from one moment to the next...the people who lived there, and became part of it...the motion of the waves, the erosion of the cliffs...and yet...it...
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A well deserved nomination Davie! I like this very much and don't know why you are unsure about it. (actually, I do - because I am often unsure of the ones that seem to go down best with readers )"A...
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Many thanks for your very kind comments, and for the nomination, JaML, sousease and Valoe - I'm relieved you see something worthwhile in it!Davie
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Don't know what you're not sure about with this piece,Davie, I think it is great, your poetry has such strength, many congrats on your nomination my friend, BG
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very nice, felt a bit splashed after reading congrats on the nomination also!
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- and thank you BG, and evening blue - sorry about the splashing, eb! I'm glad you enjoyed it, though.Davie
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